Ghost Motor: First 17 Pages

Here are 17 pages to start with. Keep in mind that character design is not set and barely thought about. Their names are just the stupidest names I could think of at the moment, and will be replaced. These are just sketches based on archetypical manga characters; young protagonist, pretty schoolgirl, bosozoku bully, nerdy nerd, etc.

Let me know what you think! If it's engaging, or boring, and if you can actually tell what's going on. Alright! Read right to left, manga style (yeah whatever, I'm amurican so what?)

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